Msaada tafadhali wa kujifunza kiingereza

[Gushleviv]

Habari zenu wana jf...
Nilikuwa naomba msaada kwa watalaam wa lugha ya kingereza kwani hivi sasa nimeanza kujifunza kiundani zaidi (i want to be deep) kwa hiyo unaweza ni-direct kwenye page /website/ YouTube channel yakuhusiana na hii issue, au kama na wewe unalengo kama langu waweza nipm ili tuyajenge..

karibuni wakuu...

Before you go deep prepare a deep stick!

 

[Mshua's]

I will do my best to help you my friend. Ask anything you want. I will always be here for you.

By the way it seems anytime you open up about your life experience in JF you are attacked. It supposed to be free forum. It supposed to be a place where Tanzanian support each each, build up each other, help each other. But some people have other ideas.

What?

 

[Lookmalasin]

What?

What is your question?

 

[Ototo]

Wazo zuri

 

[great vision]

Thank you for taking care. I appreciate your work

 

[great vision]

Let me try to form a sentence: My grandmother when she was a lived told me. I should respect peoples if I want to live better anywhere. Her words where full of wisdom.

 

[Lookmalasin]

Let me try to form a sentence: My grandmother when she was alive told me i should respect other people if i want to live better life anywhere. Her words were full of wisdom.

 

[Marisia]

Let me try to form a sentence: My grandmother when she was a lived told me. I should respect peoples if I want to live better anywhere. Her words where full of wisdom.

When she was alive, my grandmother told me to respect people if...

My grandmother, when she was alive, told me...

Her words were full of wisdom.

 

[great vision]

When she was alive, my grandmother told me to respect people if...

My grandmother, when she was alive, told me...

Her words were full of wisdom.

Thanks a lot all of you for correct me[emoji106]

 

[lutemi]

I 'm very poor in written as well, I assist me by correcting the above sentence

I'm very poor in writing, please assist me how to improve my writings grammatically as well my sentence above

 

[great vision]

Grammar is the way in which words are put together to form proper sentences. Eg:- She is a good person
A Noun:- is a word that is the name of something Eg:- A person (John), animal (Zebra), place (Tanzania), thing (Table), quality (honesty), idea (Revolution), action (kill), state of existence (Living).

Pronoun:- a word that represent noun in a sentence so that we don't repeat the same nouns again and again. For example; Tanzania is a beautiful country, Tanzania is full of good people.

Same two sentences can be written like this using pronoun in the second part of the sentence. Tanzania is is a beautiful country, it is full of good people.
Below are example of pronoun. I, me, you, we, us, him, her, us ours, himself, herself, they, them, their etc.
People who are interested can try to form a sentence using a noun and pronoun. Then we will get into type of pronouns. Any questions on noun and pronoun?

Let's me try to put together these two sentences; By using nouns and pronouns:
1.An elephant is among the big five animals.
2.Elephant can cause a great destruction in a short time.

An elephant is among the big five animals within a short time can cause a great destruction.

 

[Lookmalasin]

I'm very poor in writing, please assist me how to improve my writings grammatically as well my sentence above

My writing skills are very poor, please assist me on how to improve my grammar in this sentence.

 

[Lookmalasin]

Let's me try to put together these two sentences; By using nouns and pronouns:
1.An elephant is among the big five animals.
2.Elephant can cause a great destruction in a short time.

An elephant is among the big five animals within a short time can cause a great destruction.

The sentence is Ok, You have used within to connect two sentences.

Within is proposition. you can use proposition to express ability, space, time frame etc. You are expressing your opinion (proposing) that elephant can cause great destruction within a very short period of time.

Other example of proposition.

I will propose to my girlfriend to marry me this year.

I will make you an offer you cannot refuse.

That is my opinion i humbly submit to you.

Can you do it within two weeks?

Your greatness lie within.

Two plus two is equal to four.


This sentence is also correct:- An elephant is among the big five animals, it can cause great destruction in a very short time. It here is pronoun. There are a lot ways to form sentences.

 

[Mshua's]

What is your question?

I have nothing to say Sir! But I need your assistance to improve my English Language Skills. Is this a proper language that I heve written?

 

[Marisia]

I have nothing to say Sir! But I need your assistance to improve my English Language Skills. Is this a proper language that I heve written?

Hello!

Do say, "Proper Language" not "a proper language".

Also, "Have" and not "heve".

You're doing okay!

 

[Mshua's]

Hello!

Do say, "Proper Language" not "a proper language".

Also, "Have" and not "heve".

You're doing okay!

For the case of "heve", it is a typing error! I was intending to write "have". This is the same for the word language, I was intending to write Language. Otherwise I appreciate your comments on the above texts I have written. Tell me again is this a proper Language? Mostly I need your assistance on grammars, tenses and the structure of a sentence.

 

[great vision]

You have repeated the same mistake. Note this ' Proper language' not ' a proper language'

 

[great vision]

I stand to be corrected

 

[Uhakiki]

I stand to be corrected

You are right on the above correction you done

 

[Mshua's]

I

You have repeated the same mistake. Note this ' Proper language' not ' a proper language'

It was a matter of capitalization if I have not mistaken again. Otherwise let's call the guy to give us clarifications