Nilivyojihusisha kimapenzi na dada yangu

[Ngurubhe]

Nimemsoma!

Kumbe hyo slim5 upo hapa,nimeambiwa nakuiga mkuu,bahati mbaya sana cjawahi kupitia hata story yako,lakini so mbaya yamkin majaliwa ya mora hili kutokea je?

 

[pozzyfaza]

hakuna kitu nisichokipenda kama hiki. haya ni mambo ya fb co JF

 

[kwamtoro]

Itaendelea wadau. Pepo at work.

 

[umuhiri marato]

we ni muandishi mzuri,ongeza juhudi ndg

 

[maisha na pesa]

siku nyingine jifunze kufupisha kama unaona huna kisa kirefu mana ile naanza tu kusoma nimeshajua mwisho upoje njoo maliza chombezo lako tukushushie comments za kurestore saikolojia yako

 

[Washawasha]

Aisee!
Nalog off

 

[Ngurubhe]

hakuna kitu nisichokipenda kama hiki. haya ni mambo ya fb co JF

ipite tu,do not read this mkuu.you are totally not obliged to.

 

[Down To Earth]

JF imevamiwa na Watoto wa Chekechea.......

Ndiyo busara za uzee wako huu?

 

[Kisamawe]

daa! kastor kameishia patamu fanya hima uje umalizie mkuu.

 

[Chiu]

Mkuu itaendelea lini?

 

[Mshobaa]

Ndiyo busara za uzee wako huu?

hahahahh

 

[hyusuph]

unamuiga slim5 kusema itaendelea. Afadhali mwenzako alikuwa anavuta story inakuwa ndefu na vichembezo vya hapa na pale. Wewe story yako ipo dry na fupi then unatuambia itaendelea. Kweli utunzi ni.vipaji, na wewe huna hicho kipaji.

Acha wivu wa kijinga ww dogo kajitahidi sana na hata spelling errors kwake ni chache sana, wengine humu maneno mistari miwili tu na huwezi elewa nini anamaanisha due to spelling error ijekuwa yy story ndefu but no such mistakes!

Kijana story ni nzuri sana waweza kuwa mtunzi/muandishi mzuri sana ikiwa utajiendeleza......keep it up

 

[MstahikiMeya]

Hadithi ya kusadikika

 

[Danny Massawe]

stori ni tamu sana...nimefurahi kuisoma na nataka kujua mwisho utakuwaje

 

[kabanga]

Ikiendelea naomba mniite....

 

[Foundation]

Acha wivu wa kijinga ww dogo kajitahidi sana na hata spelling errors kwake ni chache sana, wengine humu maneno mistari miwili tu na huwezi elewa nini anamaanisha due to spelling error ijekuwa yy story ndefu but no such mistakes!

Kijana story ni nzuri sana waweza kuwa mtunzi/muandishi mzuri sana ikiwa utajiendeleza......keep it up

Wivu wa nini sasa? Upumb...avu nao ni kipaji

 

[Mkudisingo]

ungepeleka jukwaa la mapenzi ndugu

 

[Madcheda]

Shigongo kaharibu vijana. Heb msome ngugi Wa thiogo upate technique zaid

 

[Ngurubhe]

Acha wivu wa kijinga ww dogo kajitahidi sana na hata spelling errors kwake ni chache sana, wengine humu maneno mistari miwili tu na huwezi elewa nini anamaanisha due to spelling error ijekuwa yy story ndefu but no such mistakes!

Kijana story ni nzuri sana waweza kuwa mtunzi/muandishi mzuri sana ikiwa utajiendeleza......keep it up

thanks indeed for your observation mkuu!.Najua kama watanzania ni watalaam wa kukatishana tamaa!,wachache kam wewe Hyusuph wanaweza kutujenga na si kutubomoa

 

[Ngurubhe]

Shigongo kaharibu vijana. Heb msome ngugi Wa thiogo upate technique zaid

Hata mbuyu ulianza kama mchicha mkuu.