This is University of Dar es Salam bwana,its challenges towards brighter education!

[Calnde]

By Calnde's personal demand, I am compelled to reluctantly play Kifimbocheza on a nitty gritty Planck scale.



Unaweza kusema

No one can doubt the importance of UDSM...

No one doubts the importance of UDSM...

There is no doubt over the importance of UDSM...

BUT NOT

No one doubt over importance of UDSM

A person cannot "doubt over" the importance of UDSM, a person can "have doubt over" the importance of UDSM.

On another level, this sentence is overly presumptuous.Obviously I entertain a lot of doubts over the importance of the UDSM, especially if it's students cannot construct simple and comprehensible English sentences. So beginning a sentence with "no one...", unless you are penning fiction is overly self-exposing



There is a dyslexic typo biulding instead of building, one can say it is just a typo. But also there is a logical redundancy bordering on a fallacy, If no one has doubt over the importance of the UDSM, then why do you feel the need to say "Neither do I". This exposes not only a grammatical/ spelling weakness which to some people can be more tolerable, but also an organizational messyness that is betrayed by this jumbled thought pattern.



This sounds horribly like someone trying to say "Nowadays there are stories going around about this university, some true though many exaggerated..."

So the dyslexia is not only with letters in words, you also rearrange words in sentences.You have all the words but most are misplaced giving a jumbled sentence which is not clear, and people with no advantage of having English as a second language, and therefore the ability to reverse Engineer your sentence, may very well not understand what you are saying.

The sentences come across like those joke people make of White preachers and bad translators, you know what you want to say, you have your points, but putting down straight english sentences is a problem.You actually realize this and start to mix your english and swahili, when you do this your points become much clearer and you are actually intellectually convincing, this says you are not a dumb guy, after all you managed to get into University, this language problem is a national problem.So please understand that I am not belittling you personally, I am indicting our entire educational process for allowing a University student (I am goping with my previous line of thought since you did not dispute that, and this entire hullaballoo is based on that extrapolation) should be much better than that at expressing himself.
Hata hivyo still management under Mukandala imeprove failure to large extent.




Now when you actually realize that English is not your strong suit, you can communicate your points relevantly.




Hapa bado tunaona kuna tatizo la kujieleza hata katika Kiswahili, maji yanakatika kwa siku nzima hasa ukizingatia Dar hii joto ndiyo nyumbani kwake?

Una maana maji yanakatika ukizingatia dar ni joto? Una maana hii ni adha kubwa sana hasa ukizingatia Dar ni joto sana? Hiki kipande muhimu sana, the esence of your sentence, cha kusema "hii ni adha kubwa sana" hakipo katika sentensi yako.Kukosekana kwa kipande hiki kunauifanya sentensi yako ielee hewani. Tunaweza kuelewa tu kwa sababu tunaelewa hali halisi ya DAR na tunaweza kufanya fill in the gaps, lakini akija mtu ambaye haijui Dar na kwa hiyo labda hawezi kufanya fill in the gaps, anaweza kutoelewa unaongelea nini, unaongelea maji yanakatika ukizingatia joto, anaweza kufikiri joto ndiyo linasababisha maji kukatika.




Ukiandika Kiswahili again unaeleweka vizuri kuliko kiingereza, with the occassional typos ambazo kila mtu anazo.



waderns is not a word in either English or Swahili, I believe you are referring to wardens



This is call is not grammatically correct, sounds like "Me love you long time", this is a call kwa wapenda elimu.... would be more like it.

The more central issue is you not realizing that english is not your strong suit and not opting strategically to use Swahili.I believe your post would have done more justice to the issues presented had it been presented in Swahili. But this may be a blessing in disguise in that it provides opportunities for correction and improvement so I would not discourage you from using English no matter how inadequate it may be, it is mostly through practise that we better our linguistic skills to an erudite lofty level of oratory and penmanship.

Just to put my pronounced passion and punditry parlaying on porous pompous puttering, persons of presidential privileges as well as perfectly practising populist pugilists parrotting pandemic politricks have had their heads slain, figuratively of course, on this very issue.

So don't take it personal.

Thank you Sir!(I guess not madam)This is what I expected instead of criticising without any authority.I understand your intention of correcting me to become perfect in this foreign language!You can have a look on every post I make for free criticism.

 

[LazyDog]

Huku kuzinguana sasa rafiki.

Hapana, sikuwa natania - but don't sweat over it.
Ili usinielewe vibaya, ngoja nikuonyeshe kilichonivutia humu jamvini,

My take on this won't suit your standpoint and I will first and foremost apologize if I will, at any point, sound offensive or show direct attack on you for, none of it is intended to be so.

Kuna mwingine atashindwa maana ya baadhi ya maneno hapo juu, ila bado ataweza kupata picha ya kinachosemwa.
Sehemu nyingine ambayo nilielewa na kufurahia kusoma ni hii hapa.


Kuhusu kwa nini nimedhani wewe ni mwanasheria, cheki PM.
Thanks!



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[LazyDog]

Thank you Sir!(I guess not madam)This is what I expected instead of criticising without any authority.I understand your intention of correcting me to become perfect in this foreign language!You can have a look on every post I make for free criticism.

That is the spirit!

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[Yo Yo]

Mi nafundisha twisheni...mlete binti yako kwangu....

Hisabati hujui na wewe si zao la Udsm.

 

[Waberoya]

By Calnde's personal demand, I am compelled to reluctantly play Kifimbocheza on a nitty gritty Planck scale.

Just to put my pronounced passion and punditry parlaying on porous pompous puttering, persons of presidential privileges as well as perfectly practising populist pugilists parrotting pandemic politricks have had their heads slain, figuratively of course, on this very issue.

So don't take it personal.

Huyu aliyeandika hapa lazima atakuwa mzungu!! siamini kwa mwafrika kuandika kiingereza kizuri na kigumu kama hiki, naamini waingereza wenyewe inabidi watembee na dictionary. Kama sio mzungu basi lazima atakuwa mtumwa mzoefu aliyekomaa na anayeringia kuwa mtumwa!! ,sasa amekuwa mnyampara wa lugha, kuwa kila mtumwa mdogo atakayekosea lugha basi yuko radhi kumkosoa, akitukuza na kudhihirisha kuwa yeye ni mtumwa aliyekomaa!

kasi tunayo! (siyo kazi)


waberoya

 

[Pundit]

Huyu aliyeandika hapa lazima atakuwa mzungu!! siamini kwa mwafrika kuandika kiingereza kizuri na kigumu kama hiki, naamini waingereza wenyewe inabidi watembee na dictionary. Kama sio mzungu basi lazima atakuwa mtumwa mzoefu aliyekomaa na anayeringia kuwa mtumwa!! ,sasa amekuwa mnyampara wa lugha, kuwa kila mtumwa mdogo atakayekosea lugha basi yuko radhi kumkosoa, akitukuza na kudhihirisha kuwa yeye ni mtumwa aliyekomaa!

kasi tunayo! (siyo kazi)


waberoya

Huyo siyo mzungu wala mtumwa, ni Pundit tu.

Na kama unaona hiyo lugha ya ajabu sana labda wewe ndiye unayeenda polepole sana na si mimi ninayeenda kwa kasi sana.

Kama unaandika Kiingereza andika vizuri, kama unaandika Kiswahili andika vizuri, kama unafanya logical analysis fanya vizuri, usipofanya vizuri yeyote ana haki na wajibu wa kukosoa, ndiyo maana ya forum.

Ona hata wenyewe wanakosoana hapa

Ally Hassan Mwinyi, ambaye jina lake limetukuka katika ujuvi wa Kiswahili, alisema mwenyewe kwamba "Kiingereza ndiyo Kiswahili cha dunia" sasa yeye naye alikuwa mtumwa?

 

[Waberoya]

Huyo siyo mzungu wala mtumwa, ni Pundit tu.

Na kama unaona hiyo lugha ya ajabu sana labda wewe ndiye unayeenda polepole sana na si mimi ninayeenda kwa kasi sana.

Kama unaandika Kiingereza andika vizuri, kama unaandika Kiswahili andika vizuri, kama unafanya logical analysis fanya vizuri, usipofanya vizuri yeyote ana haki na wajibu wa kukosoa, ndiyo maana ya forum.

Ona hata wenyewe wanakosoana hapa

Ally Hassan Mwinyi, ambaye jina lake limetukuka katika ujuvi wa Kiswahili, alisema mwenyewe kwamba "Kiingereza ndiyo Kiswahili cha dunia" sasa yeye naye alikuwa mtumwa?

Tuko pamoja kaka, just challenge, napigana usiku na mchana kukijua, pengine naona kama nimepata mwalimu sasa, maan amzee kuunganisha pale si mchezo!, I will send PM, kula tuisheni. Kiingereza siyo kuwa kiswahili cha dunia, wala nini Ni lugha ya dunia, nadhani kuna haja ya kubadili mfumo wetu wa elimu uwe kama Ghana, Botswana, masomo yote kuanzia primary ni kiingereza
wana somo moja tu la lugha na utamaduni wao amabalo wanasoma mpaka chuko kikuu.

Kindly I need help mzee, maana kazi ipo

soma PM yako

waberoya

 

[George Jinasa]

Pundit, kama umekaa nje ya tz miaka mingi,ndiyo hali ya kiingereza kwenye vyuo vyetu, mnaobisha msibishe ukweli. Watanzania wengi kujieleza kwa kiingereza ni tatizo. Nimesoma Tanzania najua, na huku nilipo nakumbushwa kila siku na waafrika wenzangu ambao wanasema tz tunajua kiswahili tu. Wenye watoto hakikisheni mnawafundisha watoto wenu nyumbani, kusoma kwenye english medium schools siku hizi sio jawabu kuna usanii kama ulivyo kwenye sekta nyingine

Ndio maana wengine siku zote twapiga kelele elimu itolewe kwa Kiswahili hadi PHD maana kuna dhana potovu kwamba english au French ndiyo elimu. Kama hata houseboy huko Ulaya anaweza ongera English mzuri kuliko tunaokosoani kiligha
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