Riwaya ya Kijasusi Mabaduni wa serikali

[barakuda]

Wala haivutii hata kidogo

 

[Street brain]

Shusha mzigo

 

[julaibibi]

Njooni huku mzigo tayari
fuentte
NiggaPac
julaibibi
Cauldron
hamkTz
Mzee Mamvi
Boogman
cha kwanza
DR SANTOS
Sinoni
Gily Gru
Continental Ground
Shunie
DeepPond
WAlk04
Evelyn Salt
Antonia
Watag na wengine waje.
Ulimwengu wa Elimu na burudani.
Right eye

Naichek hapa

 

[Cash Generating Unit]

Mkuu unatakiwa kwanza ujifunze uandishi, story yako mpaka sasa imeshindwa kuteka hisia zangu kama ya singanojr & INSIDER MAN & UMUGHAKA13.

Unashindwa kuipangilia story yako, story haina picha kabisa wala haisisimui. Kumbuka chapter 1 ndo inatakiwa kuteka hisia za watu ili awe na hamu ya kufuatilia next chapter.

Mimi ni msema ukweli always, nategemea kuona changes next episode

 

[Sonko Bibo]

Mkuu unatakiwa kwanza ujifunze uandishi, story yako mpaka sasa imeshindwa kuteka hisia zangu kama ya singanojr & INSIDER MAN & UMUGHAKA13.

Unashindwa kuipangilia story yako, story haina picha kabisa wala haisisimui. Kumbuka chapter 1 ndo inatakiwa kuteka hisia za watu ili awe na hamu ya kufuatilia next chapter.

Mimi ni msema ukweli always, nategemea kuona changes next episode

Pac kama Pac mwenyewe,
Challenge accepted.

 

[Mzee wa Chai]

Mkuu unatakiwa kwanza ujifunze uandishi, story yako mpaka sasa imeshindwa kuteka hisia zangu kama ya singanojr & INSIDER MAN & UMUGHAKA13.

Unashindwa kuipangilia story yako, story haina picha kabisa wala haisisimui. Kumbuka chapter 1 ndo inatakiwa kuteka hisia za watu ili awe na hamu ya kufuatilia next chapter.

Mimi ni msema ukweli always, nategemea kuona changes next episode

Pia story ukianzisha weka hata episode 5 ili watu waweze kuelewa kwanza ila huyu naona tutamtukana siyo mda na story haitoisha hii

 

[Shadow 08]

Jamaa naona ana dip watu watakupigia humu mana wamevurugwa

 

[Sonko Bibo]

Jamaa naona ana dip watu watakupigia humu mana wamevurugwa

Nani kawapa namba yangu??
Shadow 08

 

[Shadow 08]

Nani kawapa namba yangu??
Shadow 08

We c ulisema story karbia unaimalza kutunga sehemu ya mwisho cjh ushaimalza, Sasa una desh desh nini au unatafuta attention ya watu humu [emoji849][emoji849][emoji849]

 

[Sonko Bibo]

We c ulisema story karbia unaimalza kutunga sehemu ya mwisho cjh ushaimalza, Sasa una desh desh nini au unatafuta attention ya watu humu [emoji849][emoji849][emoji849]

Mkuu vuta siti ya mbele kabisa agiza na korosho za kushanta utachoka mwenyewe

 

[Sonko Bibo]

katawa
ilore
mshakamshaka
Just Nana
Kelvin35

 

[Mzee wa Chai]

Bwege huyu

 

[Iron Chuma]

Ratiba ya hii ikoje? Au ukipata muda?

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[Sinoni]

Haijaisha bado ?

 

[Sonko Bibo]

Mzigo utashuka Juma.3 saa 15:00pm.
Mafans mniwie radhi maana ratiba yetu ni kila J.tatu but mzigo ni Heavy na ubora tunauzingatia sana ili hadhira ipate kilicho kizuri.
Tuwe pamoja mpaka mwisho .

 

[Augustine Genius]

Jamaa naona ana dip watu watakupigia humu mana wamevurugwa

Sio "dip" mkuu ila ni "beep"

 

[Jackal]

Tuambie kabisa kama hii Riwaya itafika mwisho ili nianze kusoma🤔

 

[Sonko Bibo]

Tuambie kabisa kama hii Riwaya itafika mwisho ili nianze kusoma🤔

Hakuna wa kuzuia bablai.
Soma ndugu, Naweza nikataja hadi tarehe itakayoisha na ikawa hivyo.

 

[the-sniper]

Mzigo utashuka Juma.3 saa 15:00pm.
Mafans mniwie radhi maana ratiba yetu ni kila J.tatu but mzigo ni Heavy na ubora tunauzingatia sana ili hadhira ipate kilicho kizuri.
Tuwe pamoja mpaka mwisho .

Hivi sasa ni Saa 1545

 

[Sonko Bibo]

Hivi sasa ni Saa 1545

Very soon mzigo unashuka, waite wakae mkao.
Ninauedit hapa,
Changamoto ni suala la umeme but niko speed sana ili tufike.